Thursday, September 15, 2011

Montana

Twas a warm and windy very windy May
day my mom was getting ready for work and like i said it was a very windy day so our gate was opening and closing and when my mom left my black chihuahua Montana and his sister Ahleah were eating and my window was broken cuz my bike fell on it along time ago but lets get back to the story Montana got out of the window and the gate was opening and closing so he got out of the gate and he went to the drive in/out and was ready to cross the street not knowing that cars were coming  and crash he got ran over it was a hit and run my mom said "he died so fast that he did not make a nosie i was heart broken i was not even there i was on a camping trip he was my best friend/best dog in the world he was my baby i loved him
RIP
Tony Montana Montez
Love,Railyn

4 comments:

  1. I am looking forward to reading your assigned posts. Let me know if you need help understanding how to do that. Great start with your blog! The background is fun. I love that it is dedicated to your dog. I know how important a dog can be in your life. Montana was lucky to have you in his life!

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  2. That must be very hard to lost your pet, I have a dog who I love very much, too! One thing, it would be easier to read your story if you add some punctuation and descriptive words!

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  4. i'm so sorry to hear about your dog, that is terrible. i had a little chihuahua that also got hit by a car kinda in the same way. my brother left the garage door open and she got out. i was at school at the time and when i got home my mom told me the sad news. i was heart broken!

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